Copywriting-Headline Discussion(1)

Posted: September 25, 2010 by sin90513 in copy discussion, headline

這是一個殺蟲水的廣告。

A. Good

B. 廣告都是沒有很直接的道出產品的功效如何強勁,而是透過圖像和文字的配合從側面襯托產品的殺蟲能力之強,使捕繩草也沒辦法找到食物。這廣告最厲害的地方就是觀眾必需懂得圖中是什麼植物,然後再留意它手上抗議的字牌,才會看懂其內容。

C. Indirect Headline

D. 這個廣告透過擬人,借用捕繩草會捕食昆蟲的特性,比喻因為有強敵(特效殺蟲水)的出現,使它本來捕蟲的工作都失去了,因此拿著紙牌抗議起來。

E. Headline就是整個廣告中的關鍵,”will work for food”的意思就是會為食物而工作,由於圖像裡拿起寫有此字句的紙牌是一稞捕繩草,因此Headline和圖像的配合就得出了捕繩草因殺蟲水而導致失業的情況。

Give the commercial, a break.

Posted: September 25, 2010 by chuchu. in headline

06广告创意风暴(六十二) 

Nice~ 

Becase the headline give the message so passively, but audioes can still get it in a second=] 

Having passive headline makes the ad more interesting!! 

Indirect headline.

play with words.

Giving them a break is just like fire them~haha~

all curves. no calories

Posted: September 25, 2010 by chuchu. in headline

06广告创意风暴(六十二) 

Nice~ 

all curves. no calories 其實都係講緊飲我,妳會slim,會有曲線會好靚,好sexy,好似個coke樽禁sexy!! 

從no calories,講出benefit. 

而個all curves 襯個no calories,營造一個對比的效果.看上去又整齊d~ 

direct headline.

rehortiol, the bottle ,your body.

the bottle just looks like a sexy body.

Very powerful

Posted: September 25, 2010 by chuchu. in headline

06广告创意风暴(五十九) 

fair=] 

精而簡,very powerful…�� just when it is show with the image. 

如果只看圖,觀眾也會明白內容… 

這個headline的作用看起也不大. 

相反,如果只看headline,不看圖…甚至會覺得老土俗氣… 

direct headline

Playing with the “powerful”.

That is so powerful that can helps robber~

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Posted: September 25, 2010 by kerwinblog in headline

A.好
B. HEADLINE簡潔清晰
加上構圖有趣同有創意
C.THE COMMAND HEADLINE
D.用CAUSE AND EFFECT- TELL THE EFFECT IF DON’T DO IT
E. 如果只是看HEADLINE.是不會知道要stub什麼
加上圖就會明白個中意思 . 所以2者是要一起看的 , 不可分開!

Arbys

Posted: September 25, 2010 by tingelis in headline

a)  I think the headline is good.

b)  Because this is a good metaphor.

c)  The type of headline is the indirect headline.

d)  The technigne of the hradlinr is headline twist.

e)  係headline後面用左red color做底,令headline出d, 唔會忽略..

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Posted: September 24, 2010 by kerwinblog in headline

A.好

B. HEADLINE簡潔易明 , 加上構圖令人覺得好奇吸引
C.THE DIRECT HEADLINE
D.用ELIMINATE既手法表達眼睛的重要性
E.  如果只是看HEADLINE..給予人的印象很低
因為我們都知道眼睛是重要的 , 但加上圖就會加強震撼感
從另一方面想: 沒有眼睛的後果 .
POWERFUL VISUAL+ UNDERSTATED HEADLINE =GOOD 🙂

*Copywriting three*

Posted: September 24, 2010 by salene in headline

The headline is “The meat shop, stop child trafficking.” I think this is command headline.

When I saw this sentence “stop child trafficking.” I can know the concept of this ad clearly.

I think that this ad want to bring out that child trafficking as common as buy meat in market so “stop child trafficking!”

*Copywriting two*

Posted: September 24, 2010 by salene in headline

Two ads are talk about same thing.

The headline of first ad “你能長到甚麼高度?” and the second ad ” 你能亮到甚麼程度?”

These are question headline.And the meaning is your creative can grow to what level, glitter to what level.

*Copywriting one*

Posted: September 24, 2010 by salene in headline

The ad for World Health Organization advocacy against smoking.

The headline “Congratulations, you’re 37mm closer to cancer.Cancer cures smoking.”

I think this is the direct headline. This ad told us Cancer cures smoking directly and present the idea clearly with the image.